Comments on: THE LION http://dilshansudarshana.wordpress.com/2007/12/23/the-lion/ Sun, 23 Dec 2007 17:13:01 +0000 http://wordpress.com/ hourly 1 By: Half Doctor http://dilshansudarshana.wordpress.com/2007/12/23/the-lion/#comment-9 Half Doctor Sun, 23 Dec 2007 17:13:01 +0000 http://dilshansudarshana.wordpress.com/2007/12/23/the-lion/#comment-9 Hi, Read your small article. Keep it up and write more on the same topic. Tell us why you like the lion. What you think of when you see a lion. etc. But please also remember to correct your spelling mistakes, which could be easily done if you had first written this on MS word and used the spell checker. I'm sure you will improve! Keep at it... Greetings for the New Year! Hi,
Read your small article.
Keep it up and write more on the same topic.
Tell us why you like the lion. What you think of when you see a lion. etc.
But please also remember to correct your spelling mistakes, which could be easily done if you had first written this on MS word and used the spell checker.
I’m sure you will improve! Keep at it…
Greetings for the New Year!

]]> By: SweetIdiot http://dilshansudarshana.wordpress.com/2007/12/23/the-lion/#comment-8 SweetIdiot Sun, 23 Dec 2007 06:29:42 +0000 http://dilshansudarshana.wordpress.com/2007/12/23/the-lion/#comment-8 hi, just a few corrections :) THE LION The Lion is called the king of beasts. There are lions in the forests of Africa and India. There however, aren't any lions in the forests of Sri Lanka. There are lions at the Dehiwala zoo. The male lion is a beautiful animal. He has a long, shaggy mane. Young lions have yellow or golden manes and old lions have black manes. The female lions or lionnesses do not have manes. She has a short glossy coat. Lions are dangerous animals. hi, just a few corrections :)

THE LION

The Lion is called the king of beasts. There are lions in the forests of Africa and India. There however, aren’t any lions in the forests of Sri Lanka. There are lions at the Dehiwala zoo. The male lion is a beautiful animal. He has a long, shaggy mane. Young lions have yellow or golden manes and old lions have black manes. The female lions or lionnesses do not have manes. She has a short glossy coat.

Lions are dangerous animals.

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